PDA

View Full Version : The Loss by RAYVERonXTC


RAYVERonXTC
02-25-2009, 10:05 AM
bringing out one of my classics. written by me.

The Loss
As the world is torn apart by the death of two brothers
we turn to eachother looking for answers
and as our questions find their answers more questions
arise fueling more and more tears into our eyes.
We look back and wish it were all a bad dream
that the images flickering on the screen were
all just part of a movie scene.
How we wish it were all untrue 'cause maybe then
we would still have...
You.
Fast Eddie
03-01-2009, 09:33 AM
bringing out one of my classics. written by me.

The Loss
As the world is torn apart by the death of two brothers
we turn to eachother looking for answers
and as our questions find their answers more questions
arise fueling more and more tears into our eyes.
We look back and wish it were all a bad dream
that the images flickering on the screen were
all just part of a movie scene.
How we wish it were all untrue 'cause maybe then
we would still have...
You. Very nice vin!
RAYVERonXTC
03-02-2009, 04:00 PM
why thank you Seņor Shephard
bigD
03-02-2009, 10:27 PM
excellant
03-03-2009, 08:18 AM
U showed me this before right? Good shit.
RAYVERonXTC
03-03-2009, 02:04 PM
yeah, i wrote it on 9/12/01. and its been on every deep thought forum i've registered for and on poetry.com and the book they published for 9-11
Fast Eddie
03-05-2009, 01:04 PM
nice dude , very cool